I would call this a nice article if I read it elsewhere. The thing is most of the advices here are already repeated and they are all over the internet. I read girlschase becuse here I can find stuff which are not avilable ellsewhere. Bar has been set so high that I hate to say, this article couldn't measure up. Here are some upgrade I would suggest:
You seemed to me more of a do-er than a talker. That's an amazing thing. But we don't get to see you in action. So I would suggest, make your writing more "lively" and throw some personality.
This comment is not a put down by any means. I love your teachings. But I thought I better point it out.